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I'm not going to lecture you about Mrs. Peters. I liked her as a teacher, and from the way you explained everything, I believe you did the right thing. I can't see you as the dad type, though; you've always hated kids.
As I said, this one would be short and sweet. From what you told me in your last letter you have confirmed to me.
Rob, you are definitely going to hell.
Forever your friend
Jenifer xxx
The End, or is it just the beginning
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I hope you enjoyed it and don't forget to score the story.
- COMMENTS
LNRAstro18 days agoA supposedly smart guy allows an idiot beat him almost to death and does nothing, hides it from the police. Sorry, that BS took me out of the story and cost you two stars.
Anonymous29 days agoI favor happy endings. If only the sister had told her older sister what had happened, what was said. It was expected or why write that the sister was even there. It seems a bit cruel.
brunnzl6 months agogood characters, keeps me hooked.
the writing style is a bit clumsy though; especially some recurring redundancies feel like you didn't bother reading your own script after pinning down your stream of confluence. :)
e.g. 'I don't answer straight away, and if I am honest, it is a little awkward. "It should be fine. It is a little awkward, to be honest, but it is nice to have company once in a while."' if you wrote this on purpose: please don't, it's a bad idea. and if it was not on purpose: proofread your script, or have somebody else do it. you don't need to explain your character's thoughts and then repeat them in their words over and over again.
Anonymous7 months agoHopefully Mr. Peters finds out and divorces Mrs. Peters. I’m not too upset that Rob was hospitalized and abandoned by his friends. He’s not an especially good or bad guy, but it’s karmic, even if the beating he deserved was from the wrong person.
Freddog66019 months agoThis is a easy 5 stars. Well written, great humor,clever dialogue and a good pace.
Well done.
