All Comments on 'You Are My Home Ch. 02'

Been there. I really liked the flow of your story.

Thank you for sharing it.

Very good story. Keep it going. Age appropriate for me.

Please continue. Chapters one and two have given a sense of reality. I thank you.

Please keep going, it's an excellent story.

Good Story. Please continued.

Thank you .

K.

more please

I think most men and women in such a situation would not go along with the others vices.Im glad these two are being realistic enough to try .Cant wait for next chapter in their lives.Great read.

Great stuff. Enjoying the hell out of this story

Please continue, I love the story so far.

Well, as both a REALTOR and a Widower all I can say is wow...keep it UP

Thanks for all the great positive comments. I have tried very hard to ground the characters in a very plausible reality. The things they do and the way they think are grounded in their past experiences.

When finding a new love, the depth of being comfortable with that person, and the ability to reveal the real you, weighs heavy on how successful that relationship will be. The whole idea promoted between these two is that of honesty. From this, their relationship has a real chance to grow and blossom, in every area.

Adored these stories. I love senior sex, especially now that my wife and I are enjoying better sex than at any time in our 30 years together. I'd love your two characters to build a fully equipped playroom in the grounds of their property and entertain other highly sexed seniors for Saturday afternoon pleasures. If you don't write about that scenario then I will, in one of my future stories! Excellent writing, please continue.

Thanks for the comment sparktj. I do have something planned along those lines, in chapters 5-6. Just finished chapter 4 and chapter 6 may be where the specially developed playground, of sorts, come together. If you the readers wish the story to continue, then I'd be pleased to do so, as I am really enjoying this whole story myself.

Thanks again and don't forget to vote and comment.

ed.

I loved this story, so well written and very erotic... Keep up the great work and can't wait to read more.. Arthur C

Nice, please continue.......

YUMMMMMMM!!!!

This definitely has the look of turning into something hot. I like it a lot.

Sweet, civil and sexy. Applause!

great story love the start an progression ,got my mind workin and my Rod growin

Needs a good editor. Very slim storyline.

Started beautifully but when it devolved to the photography it was too much at odds with the first chapter and seemed gratuitous. Probably it could have been better ending at chapter 1.