All Comments on 'You Are My Home Ch. 04'

by edsachry

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ChippymickChippymickalmost 10 years ago
Next

Looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Enjoyable

I am very much enjoying the progress of your enthralling story.

Please continue.

Thankyou

Tarheels_FanTarheels_Fanalmost 10 years ago
Enjoying this story

I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Continuation

Please carry on with this story, it's wonderful and I'm enjoying every moment of it!!!

njguy0911njguy0911almost 10 years ago
great work

Please continue can't seem to get enough of them. The waiting is agonizing. But Love it. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
He is one lucky bastard

Keep it UP

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
enjoyable read

I am enjoying the story very much and can't wait for the next chapter

Thanks for writing it.

edsachryedsachryalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

Thanks all for the encouragement and comments. Chap. 05 is waiting for approval, and I have just about finished Chap. 06, which if you've been following the saga, will throw you for a loop. I also have plans for Chapters 07 & 08.

Thanks again.

ed

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Writing, overall

After I Located Chap. 1 and started from the beginning, I was delighted in the story line, the interaction between the characters merging so efficiently. There was absolutely no difficulty in following the story. The writing was done extremely well, few typos and even fewer grammatical flaws. It reminded me of an English term paper that I had to write back in the 70's on an entirely different subject. My English professor rewarded me with an A+; much to my surprise. I'm sure that I'll have to add some more when I've completed this story.

ManofMithgarManofMithgarover 9 years ago
Ozarkian love

Yessirree you are doing well.

P7y1r4oP7y1r4oalmost 6 years ago
Homestead?

I've enjoyed this story so far.. tho some of the chapters have been shorter. I'm curious bout wether this sharing its self may become regular thing

Or possibly lead to extended family..as in Christy/Sandy getting pregnant?

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

Great tale of a second love for both Michael and Diane along with a twist of two of her friends joining the fun. Well Done 5 stars

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