You could have added some things here. Such as Melanie sucking Heather's other tit. Also, Janine feeling left out, giving for Simon's ass a rimming. A longer chapter would have made this a better chapter.
This is me, Sev. Aka SEVERUSMAX. I can't get back into my main account for some odd reason, though I can on the forum. I created this account so as to continue posting my stories on that side. Thanks for your continued reading of my smut. I don't mind constructive criticism, b...