by cantdog
Right away I was captured by the way you started the story and I really enjoyed the flashback scenes. You have quite a gift
This is a great piece of erotic literature sofar. The danger, the sexual tension, the compassion ... can't wait to read more.
This, from the start was not the usual 'run of the mill' erotic pulp. I expected something a bit special from you, and was not disappointed.
Thanks for a good read. It is professionally written, and I'm glad I check it out. I guess you have another fan.
anonymous, old coot, that this was my first one. You have to start somewhere. I haven't removed it because there are still parts of it I dig. But I do better work now.
cantdog