All Comments on 'You Can't Go Home Again'

by cantdog

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jnsluvmfnjnsluvmfnabout 20 years ago
Your writing captured me

Right away I was captured by the way you started the story and I really enjoyed the flashback scenes. You have quite a gift

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Not just another story

This is a great piece of erotic literature sofar. The danger, the sexual tension, the compassion ... can't wait to read more.

Teenage VenusTeenage Venusalmost 20 years ago
One good turn....

This, from the start was not the usual 'run of the mill' erotic pulp. I expected something a bit special from you, and was not disappointed.

Thanks for a good read. It is professionally written, and I'm glad I check it out. I guess you have another fan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Hmmmmmmm

I expected better after reading comments on another story.

cantdogcantdogabout 19 years agoAuthor
Well, I have to say

anonymous, old coot, that this was my first one. You have to start somewhere. I haven't removed it because there are still parts of it I dig. But I do better work now.

cantdog

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