You Got to Know When to Hold 'Em

Storyline wasn't as good as part 1. Major flaws is, it didn't matter if she had sex or not, the disrespect shown for her relationship is the killer. He gave her a choice, she choose "Howie." Nobody in their right mind would subject their love to the humiliation and hurt of going out on a date with another person. The mere appearance of impropriety should keep oneself from an action that would cause hurt and humiliation.

Sure take advice from another self-entitled gold digging slut telling you to forgive the one you escaped from, that makes total sense, to people in a mental ward. She showed him his feelings, his opinion, and his wishes meant nothing to her and they weren't even married yet, he was granted a huge gift by finding out she was a self-entitled narcissistic slut with feministic ideologies before he married her, sadly he goes back to her.... dude? Women who share that mindset and ideology don't change and don't love anyone but themselves, put simply there is a 98% chance she cheated throughout their marriage and the only thing she learned from their pre-honeymoon was that she'd have to keep all her affairs hidden.

JimmyThePlunger's comments are as incoherent and idiotic as his writing.

Writing was fine, but Jack was infatuated with Jenny. Otherwise, that level of disrespect would have never been tolerated, see Part 1, which was credible.

I love a good reconciliation, but this certainly was not one. "Oooooh, I totally disrespected you by GOING ON A %^$&U DATE ON OUR PRE-WEDDING VACATION WHEN YOU WARNED ME NOT TO. But I totally LUUUUUVVVV only you." Read that again as many times as needed to see how infantile it sounds.

Jenny is self-absorbed, had NO respect for reasonable boundaries, and if Jack had any sense, he'd have taken the opportunity to dodge the bullet completely.

And remember, he only went on a date of his own AFTER she left for hers; she'd effectively ended their relationship. Nothing wrong with his actions. You punch me in the face, don't be surprised if you get punched back. Or, as they say today, FAFO.

After reading the comments I see people can't believe characters do stupid things. people in life do/say dumb things all the time. Don't believe me, read the comment section!

My grandparents had an April 1st anniversary, grandma found no humor in it at all! Thanks for the tale. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

I liked the first part and felt it ended correctly, for it I gave it 4 stars. The 2nd part I liked the beginning, but it felt flat in the middle, then started ramping up the action as it went along. Then the ending (epilogue) came and it felt rushed, sure it filled in some holes of their life together, but it still felt rushed. I gave it a 4.5, but rounded up to 5 stars for the 3some action. ;-) As for Howie doing what he did, he was just providing a service for his customers, even if they didn't get any real action, at least they didn't end up in jail or in the newspapers. Howie got his ass kicked, even though he only got some groping in and some stink finger (yes she felt ashamed at what she did). And yes, she disrespected her husband to be by not taking in what he was trying to tell her at the beach about her attire, then talking with Howie about "the date" that's not really a date, but is one. In reality Howie ends up "buying her" for the night with 10K in clothes and jewelry, just like one would buy a lady of the evening (an escort). That she finally realizes it makes her feel the shame that Jack had been trying to tell her. Then suddenly she wants her old life back, only to find out Jack already left, and she's alone weeks before they were to get married.

To make this story work like an LW story should, Jack ends up cuckolding Cheryl's boyfriend Ron, (even though they're not married yet) with the help from Diane during their 3somes both at the beach hotel and at the college dorm room they were staying at, and enjoyed participating in. All in all, it was a good story, but it needed a little more action (sex).

@Jimmytheplunger. You have just joined the vocal bullshit that proliferates the comments section on LW.

Thank you for sharing your woke natural justice opinion. I'm sure there's a Pine tree or Hydrangia bush out there somewhere in need of your protection from bad humies so that natural justice can get to it first.

Back to the story: It had the opportunity to be good. With the right efitor it could have been great but too many missteps unfortunately consigned it to the middle of the road heap.

This dumb whore is trying to raise the bar on how stupid a wife/fiancé can be. Admirable effort. But would someone on a pre-honeymoon trip with their fiancé be so easily seduced by a little bling and be so damn blind to the obvious consequences of her actions? Unlikely, but it's LW so anything goes.

She does manage to turn things around though and become quite the actual loving wife. If her reaction to her boss' proposal is anything to go by, they'll be alright until death parts them. And judging by the ending it looks like that is indeed how things turned out.

The contrived parallels between the girlfriend and fiancé don't work, simply because the MC's relationship with Jenny was at a much higher level. And unlike the girlfriend's situation, his fiancé allowed herself to be seduced over a period of time while the MC was constantly warning her. That was disrespect at a very high level. Reconciliation just doesn't feel justified here, and using two young coeds to help the MC get over the betrayal, only for him to go back to Jenny, just cheapens the story.