All Comments on 'You Look Lovely Today Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great

I really like your style. Never vulgar or gross. Always elegant but extremely eròtic.... as a lady in gloves and boots is.

leather_spitfireleather_spitfireover 3 years ago
super story!

i love this story so far, i hope you continue it soon :)

i am enjoying how Christine is slowly encouraging Jack to tell her what he likes to do and to get him to do everything. i wonder what he will do with the boots and gloves she has left in the room... will he be scared to do anything vulgar in case she finds out, or will he become too excited by their presence and he can’t help himself??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Still a good premise.

Still merely preliminaries.

Three stars.

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