by mgetzhoff
Was totally drawn into the scenerio, the tantalizingly exquisite action!! Perfect with my own tastes of nipple play and the thrilling skill of a teasing mind!! Very Hot!!
This was an amazing story - the first person "me-ism" of it was what really drew me into it. Lots of lines blurred, scenario ripe..yes, indeedy, we have a great story. Thanks!
This is a very good story. It made me hard as hell and it's the same point of view that I write my stories in. I love it.
I was so drawn into the story that when I finished I was--for just a second--surprised at reality. GREAT story!