All Comments on 'You Sexy Babe You'

Like the twist at the end. 5

I like the concept! Could have used alittle more description on the physical features since it’s clearly a show about getting naked.

About half way thru the story you wrote “with Brenda showing boobs no one was looking at my bra” then at the end you say “Brenda and I had to unhook our bras and stand there topless”. Small continuity error but good story nonetheless.

The story would have been more interesting if there was no new car prize. The contestants who are chosen can win a car, so of course they stay and play. The rest of the audience has nothing to gain except watching three people take their clothes off. Why stay? Is the voyeur element enough? Without the car we could explore why people exhibit and why people watch. Fun story. Well done.