by Myanlass
I just discovered this story and read the whole thing straight. This story is amazing! I hope you’re able to continue
I know it's been a while & this series is probably one of the best I have read even after all the other couples. Any chance you could end it off with an Epilogue of Patrick & Gale like a year later ??
This ending just doesn't seem right...
How much time do you need to update a story?? Would love more of the story and maybe Ramons story!!!
You need to continue this story; please. No story is worth this long of time lapse; thank you anyway.
Patrick hasn't earned his way back into couchie but she's giving him a free pass. Real disappointed in Gail. But it's clear that she loves him but is she williang to risk her heart again?
First the good stuff - 5***** on every chapter. You have one of the best story universes I have seen on Lit. It's like getting to know a group of people across multiple stories. It's an attribute that puts it over the top for me. I liked this series, but as I read along, something seemed to be missing.
It is just...too "meh". I can't root for them, it feels like a rehashed story. Not really moving on, but going backward. This story is just a letdown.
I would like to see were these characters are headed.
I hope you finish this story. I also would like to read Nicole and Ramon's story. I think you should hook Gianni and Tara together. Love your stories please continue.
I have enjoyed this series. I am so looking forward to future updates. I hope that will be soon.
let her forgive and move foward with a fresh start with a new man like the club owner
She is not weak. I want them to work. He was young and stupid. the deserve a chance!! Love it...so glad that you updated! More please!
Update, grammatical errors did not detract from their love story.
I had forgotten about this story and thought you had too. I love Gale and Patrick-- thank you god continuing their story.
Great update and if you keep coming with updates like this all will be forgiven!!
I'm really glad to see an update. I enjoyed it. Please read it aloud or have someone else read it for grammatical errors. There were several that took me out of the story you were telling. Looking forward to the next installment
Been waiting for this update like forever. Thank u myanlass, pls just keep it coming..
Ps: need a cold shower, dat was hot... **fanning myself, damn**
At first I was upset about how fast she forgave him, but she has had years of bitterness and he was miserable to so why not let go.
I don't see why Gale following her heart is being weak. But anyways, great seeing an update, beautiful make up session, loved it.
PS. Anything about Jade and James having kids? *wink wink*
still enjoying this ride! gettin 2 the good stuff, keep it coming!
Thanks for updating - Love this series & this couple. 5 stars....