All Comments on 'Young Boss Tricked & Exposed Ch. 24-25'

by Barefan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Glad you’re back. Though this is my least favorite of your stories thus far (just too many contradictory actions and motivations and Shawna is the worst boss in the history of ever - she’s undermined Tim’s authority and respect in the satellite office, embarrassed a big client “hey, buy cycle wear and you too might have a wardrobe malfunction!”, and has totally marginalized Tim in this campaign by taking over all aspects of HIS job), but you have a great set up for future stories with this cast of characters. Could shoot for Tim’s jerk friend who manipulated Julie in the first story. Or Shawna. Or Sandy. Lots of fun to be had.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So exciting!

I like how he didn't realize he was being played until it was too late. His obliviousness is adorable! Keep up the good work. I always look forward to watching these girls trick your main character into some embarrassing scenes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
pants him!

Let's us hope that Ann gives us a show!

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