All Comments on 'Young Chocolate'

Highly recommended story with a great twist at the end. Clever plot, well-written, very pleased I read it.

Dai, your story was great. It could be even better with improvements to the grammar. One of literotica's editors could help as without some judicial editing, grammar and spelling adjustments some of the eroticism got lost in translation. Having said that, what an erotic tale!

This story is blandly written and needs much editing help with grammar, spelling, punctuation. Also, it needs to be believable and this one doesn't fit that objective at all. I hope you have a paying job because this is pretty much crap.

...in another month the BLACKS will OWN america from the BLACKHOUSE!!! ALL the whtebread pussy in america will be OWNED by THE BLACK ADONIS OBAMA!!!...so 'git ready all you whitebread males...your wives an' girlfriends an' daughters will become BLACK BREEDER VESSELS to bear from the BLACK STALLION SEED...INTERRACIAL CHILDREN as the PROUD NEW AFRICAN-amrican race in america...'git used to it!!!...WHITE SLAVERY starts in america on november 2008 forever...you'll be the BLACK GOD's SLAVES FROM NOW ON!!!...'git used to the idea...NOW IT's OUR TURN!!!...WHITEY!!!...YOU GO GIRLS!!!XXXXXOXOXOXOXO!!!...;-)))

not only is this a totally hot and horny story,

it is also very creative to switch back and forth

from the male to the female doing the narration.

good job!!! give us more :-))

sam

Very hot detailed submission. There really is nthing hotter sexually than watching your white wife suck black cock and get expertly fucked by a much younger black stalloin. My mature white wife enjoys the fact I enjoy to watch her. Especially sucking them off. She just loves 9" or bigger uncut bbc. And often really tries to peak my excitement by rimming and eating their muscular ass and sucking their plumb size balls making tjem cum down her slutty throat. What a hot scene indeed.

Fucking great story. It really turns me on knowing I’m not the only white women that loves BBC. Being married for 7 yrs and being in my mid 50s. I found it very excited a younger guy would be interested in me let alone younger black guy. we met at a gas station about 5 mouths ago and after texting each other for weeks we met for drinks one day. I wore my very low cut blouse that revealed a lot of my big 46 DD breast. Will we have been seeing each other sense and often. I love the feel of his big black cock pounding and abusing my white pussy. I love sucking his black cock and the taste of his thick cum as he uses my mouth . I really love the way he takes control and fucks me when and how ever he want. My husband and I still have lots of sex. But it is not even close to being fucked and used by a black man. Hopefully he’ll share me with his room mate soon.

Will you read my first comment . I must tell you I finally got the meet my black lovers room mate two months ago and wow . Will my husband knows I’m fucking the black guy Earl I met at the gas station in May of this year . And he is ok with that because we still fuck a lot. But he doesn’t know is not only am I fuck Earls room mate to but I’m also fucking brother. Yes I’m addicted to black cock it seem I can’t get enough. Specially when I’m 20 years older then they are.. I love the way they use me fucking me how they want .i let them do things I won’t let my husband do. Like anal sexand dirty talk and mostly name calling never felt more of a whore and wanted and loved at the same time. I’m hoping it continue for a long time. I’m. Willing to fuck more of their friends if they ever ask me to