by Mr Story Teller
Well paced story,slow seduction gradually building to final climax. Needs a little editing and spelling corrections but an excellent story. Anticipating more chapters.
what a fantastic story! can't wait for chapter 2! makes you so hot and wet, mmm!! xxx
Real good yarn, loved how you gradually brought us in to an excited state, my cock was getting harder and harder as I read it.
Please write more.
GREAT STORY VERY SEXY AND VERY HORNY HOPE YOU HAVE SOME MORE STORIES TO TELL
Anyone not exploding as I did reading this is dead from the neck down.
Wow!
Good pacing and description of what's happening as the story evolves.
So HOT !!
Thanks for a good wank!