by Mr Story Teller
Good pacing and description of what's happening as the story evolves.
So HOT !!
Thanks for a good wank!
Anyone not exploding as I did reading this is dead from the neck down.
Wow!
GREAT STORY VERY SEXY AND VERY HORNY HOPE YOU HAVE SOME MORE STORIES TO TELL
Real good yarn, loved how you gradually brought us in to an excited state, my cock was getting harder and harder as I read it.
Please write more.
what a fantastic story! can't wait for chapter 2! makes you so hot and wet, mmm!! xxx
Well paced story,slow seduction gradually building to final climax. Needs a little editing and spelling corrections but an excellent story. Anticipating more chapters.