All Comments on 'Young Kate, My First Time Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Best lesbian play

Made my clit very erected and puss lips wet

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Beautiful!

I would love to watch two beautiful women make love together.

Olddog13Olddog13about 10 years ago
Great Story

Good pacing and description of what's happening as the story evolves.

So HOT !!

Thanks for a good wank!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I hope you continue this story - it is so HOT!

Anyone not exploding as I did reading this is dead from the neck down.

Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
WISH I WAS THERE

GREAT STORY VERY SEXY AND VERY HORNY HOPE YOU HAVE SOME MORE STORIES TO TELL

Lloyd2004Lloyd2004over 19 years ago
Fuck thats good.

Real good yarn, loved how you gradually brought us in to an excited state, my cock was getting harder and harder as I read it.

Please write more.

mummys dirty angelmummys dirty angelover 19 years ago
OHH WOW...

what a fantastic story! can't wait for chapter 2! makes you so hot and wet, mmm!! xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Write On

Well paced story,slow seduction gradually building to final climax. Needs a little editing and spelling corrections but an excellent story. Anticipating more chapters.

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