All Comments on 'Young Miss'

Nice story, I love the write up.

Simple and straightforward, great "shenanigans scene"....

Can't wait for the next one....

I'm IN LOVE WITH U...and your WRITING...Young Miss is a BEAST

Awesome work, loved it. Great to see you doing stories like this again.

I find this praise from such a WORTHY SOURCE to be truly inspiring...U bring lesbian anal erotica to a level I can only inspire to...many thanks

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! I I so much appreciate the time you took to read and provide me your thoughts on my work

Hi, Doll! Luv U Luv U LUv U! Thanks for taking the time to comment and vote

Fantastic as always!

Thank you SO MUCH for taking the time to review and comment on my little 'tale'...it's feedback like yours that allow me to hone my skills and provide you the type of erotica you enjoy reading...Thanks Again!!

She is...we are BIASED (of COURSE WE ARE...She's Our MUM), butt she is an incredible WRITER

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'Her hands clamp firmly upon my shoulders, her hips ceaselessly looping, GORING me as a bull would a hapless bullfighter. My lust sizzles deep within me, much like the lava within a volcano does. Then suddenly, her deep, skewering thrusts come to a halt, and I whine in protest as she carefully withdraws, which I very much appreciate (other "bottoms" can attest that a quick, abrupt withdrawal is quite painful oftentimes, due to the flange beneath the bell-end of the cock or cock substitute catching upon one's inner sphincter on its outward path).As is her wont, I find myself face to face with her thick, glistening truncheon, and I know what she wants: I part my red lips and accept her into my mouth. I fellate her joyfully, allowing her to use my mouth as she has my rectum; the pace is a bit different, as we have been at it for wee over an hour and a half and she is understandably beginning to tire'...I GET HOT every time I read it!

Better step it up on those reinforcements...Young Miss doesn't seem like the kind to wait around!

I love your glamorous descriptions of what Young Miss is doing to you! I say 'glamorous' meaning lush without being superfluous, beautifully described without being unnecessarily wordy. As to the action itself, I have a visual that is keeping me uncomfortably hard! Nice work.

Nicely done; more please.