Your GF Hates When You Wear Clothes Ch. 02

What I'd like to do is write a couple Asian female characters that would Asian women can read and feel attractive and appreciated when they read them. I'd like to add three women to the mix. Because I want to have a character that comes in and rescues my female story leads I'm going to team Brandi up with a 6 foot 5 Asian photographer/basketball player to accompany her as she chases stories for the school paper. The photographer would have a sister who is also very large probably 6 foot and athletic I might like to dable a bit in your smaller femish male kink with the editor of the school paper. I'm thinking she runs track and her long silky hair flowing when she runs earns her a horse related nick name like Mustang or Appaloosa. The smooth downward curve of her soft puffy eyes would conjure images of geishas if not for the dark tan her smooth complexion took from hours of outdoor training. Like Kiana Tom without the layers of makeup and Implants. Brandi my lead female in this grouping of stories is bi-curious she likes the aesthetic beauty of women more than men especially the exotic variety of women in the US compared to her native Denmark but she considers sex with men to be the ultimate physical experience. I haven't come up with names and other biographical info on the brother and sister. I would like to give my overall series lead Julie a Greencard wife he marries so she doesn't get deported. In his compacity as a bounty hunter he would rescue her from a massage parlor she was trafficked in to work at. She and Julie would live together for the purposes of passing the greencard test and their relationship has gotten sexual a few times they aren't in love mostly because he is hung up on his ex wife. As a former sex worker she'd be a touch curvier than typical with breasts that were more wide set but fuller than the standard waif Asian fantasy chick. When we encounter her first she has actually gained a few pounds as a shield from unwanted sexual attention after her massage parlor past. Her eyes are more wide set with an angry sharp downward sweep with onyx colored eyes that convey a mysterious inner strength. She would run Julie's house like a machine. She'd be the boss of her domain. She would have been forced to bleach her nipples as a sex worker making them very bright pink and very tender. The third would be one of the two special ED girls who get exploited by their male classmates I think Luke Craig from Brandi's host family should have feelings for her that he struggles with because of his autism. I'm open to suggestions on this character. She should be conventionally pretty in the way petit waify girls are. More cute than sexy. Maybe into anime cosplay.

Yeah, but... People online can be mean because they're having bad days IRL, and I'd rather assume that than assume he's being cruel for no good reason, especially when what he said makes it feel like he dislikes his own writing.

Yes, I'd be happy to help you, Pug! <3

Well,y would be careful about mistaking what an author/commenter is like in real life vs what they are like in your mind. You previously offered to help me write characters on the spectrum. Between Busting out on the bus, First boobgasm, and Brand arrives in America, I've got three entries that feature characters on the spectrum up now. If you had any notes I'd be open to hearing what I can do better. I really would like some advice on some Asian female characters I'm planning on adding. I would love to know some ways you'd like to be described that make you feel beautiful.

@MyBareTorso

Thank you! That's encouraging. I really appreciate that me trying to do something different is making people happy. <3

@Pugzilla

Well, I'm not really thin-skinned. My issue isn't really "one person didn't like it." It's that I actually liked ThanksForAllTheFish for his writing and stories. It strikes me as strange that his own stories aren't exactly far enough away from his own criticism against mine applying to his own, so it makes me wonder if his lack of actual detail or suggestion is due to him projecting his own concerns or if he's doing it out of bad-faith/malice. I've never once been told "you write too much detai," "you have an odd way of writing," or "your story is bizarre" before, which is leading me to believe that either something happened with ThanksForAllTheFish for him to say such strange things (like a bad day or something happening to him elsewhere) or if he just WANTED to try and hurt me and was willing to go against his own principles and make himself look bad to do so. I write because I have fun writing out my ideas, but I like to make others happy with them as a bonus. But if ThanksForAllTheFish is going to go out of his way to try and hurt me for reasons he won't use adult communication or maturity to speak with me on, I can't help but worry about him.

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