by MisterGumby
That was a really beautiful long story that I read at one hit. I really enjoyed it, - you have written very well - I hope from actual experience. That would be worth the effort if that is the case.
Please write some more. I have marked you as by best author.
What the hell? Tell me what woman, slave, sub or other, is going to want the "fucking in of their baby" while being slave to another woman she just met tonight? That is absolute nonsense. Having a second person there while being in such an intimate situation is crap. She should yellow light and talk to her dom right then. This should be called Mistress Malice ruins it all. And why all of a sudden Daddy's tired and dizzy when he's not allowed himself to cum all evening? That's a load of bullshit. He should be roaring ready. Please make sense.