All Comments on 'Your New Wife'

Not generally a story that I would read but damn I'm glad I did. Very sexy and very hot! Hopefully you will write a sequel or two.

5*

LOVED LOVED LOVED this story! 5 stars! Part 2 perhaps?

I loved the story. Please continue <3 I would love to see Taylor be feminised <3

Would to see a sequel of this story

Very hot and really expertly paced..The new wife element was sexy as well..Father-son stories can be so hot, especially watching the seemingly alpha type father become completely ensnared by the effeminate twink son…the son making him into a real daddy as he takes all of his seed and becoming his special little bitch..Thanks for a great story..

JT

Well written and really hot. Love for a Part 2, and more...

More please, I want to see Daddy deep inside both his new wife and his little friend.

I hope you're planning on additional chapters between hubby and new wife and even bringing the real wife into joining the new family.

I enjoyed it , nicely told but not a great deal of cross dressing.

Would be nice if the sissy son decided to try his mothers wedding dress for a proper honeymoon night experience.

Maybe have him dress up in various outfit for his dad in order to compete for the old mans affections so he leaves his wife !?

Please wear lingerie next time.

The dad's wife can't use her pussy as a weapon anymore. Afraid her husband has his eyes out for another trophy wife, she panics and works hard to hold onto her bank account, not knowing the other woman is the son.

Loved the story. I hope you write a sequel.

That was a great story 8--->0--:)

Holy shit FIVE STARS.

Absolutely loved it and would love a sequel

That was a great story

I was hoping that you would not make Taylor a typical chatty Queen. Telling Madison immediately is something a chatty queen would do and I liked the innocence of it all but it looks like your headed down a blackmail murder mystery path and it sadly is a bit disappointing to me. Anywho great story but I just wanted this to be an innocent love tale versus what it looks to be turning into.

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I don't usually reply to comments but yours caught my attention. I do have some ideas for a sequel to this story but none of them lean to Taylor "blackmailing" his dad. I just liked the idea of Taylor sharing his dirty little secrets with his bestfriend, just the two of them.

do more!!!!

Great story maybe you can continue it on

Loved it more please asap.

Why destroy your father....??

Sex is one thing, blackmail or extortion is another.

Loved all of it, the plot, Jack tension, the great sex, fuck but the last period disappointed me. Tling Madison lost one star.

Agree with the rest, continue on..

You're an awesome story teller! sequel please!!

Definitely more!

More! There HAS to be a 3-some with Maddison.

Great story. Really looking forward to a sequel even though I'm not a fan of having a third party join the couple. I vastly prefer when it's kept in the intimacy of the incestuous couple.

"He noticed a drop of semen oozing out of his piss-slit." You're not only the worst writer on this website, but the most disgusting one too. It's erotic literature, you've got no idea what you're doing.

Great story!

This story was amazing.

Would be interesting if the father becomes more feminine, even to the point with both father and son go on hormones together.

Incredibly hot story. I look forward to a future chapter in which daddy quits worrying about the pointless guilt and lets himself fully and frequently enjoy his new little wife.

Write the sequel... Please write it now.

So hot! Definitely needs a part 2!!!

So good and hot . I love seeing inscet . It's so freaking awesome. I love it even more when it happens between the dad and Son like so fuking damm hot . The way they talked About breeding had my pussy twitch in anticipation. I am a Virgin and have never shoved even a finger so I was having a hard time rubbing my clitoros and pussy . Fuk I'm

A dominant person but wanna be submissive to a hunk guy who makes me feel like his slut .I really need a dick in my Virgin pussy

paul doom, your story son seducing his dad got my cock so hard i';m old enough to be your daddy yes you could seduce me my prostrate would be tight for you my first time with you the pain the pleasure being loved by you, i'd be passive very passive for you son, enjoying me loving me your hard cock deep in me as you are making love to my tight arse you moaning loudly daddy daddy ooh daddy you're mine all mine i'm moaning yes son yes i'm yours all yours my bed is our bed now

jt you've got me paul doom

Please write a sequel! Love this story!!

Not to shabby. Great characters. Pretty believable and hot as fuck.

Taylor should call his dad by his given name from now on. Good story I hope for a sequel.

loved the story,, want to find out what happens when he tells Maddison

still dying for a sequel!! this would be a great series!

We definitely need a part 2 to this. This was so so hot.