All Comments on 'Your Turn'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Title

The story is in the Erotic Couplings area, but this friends, is a LOVING WIFE. We should all be so lucky. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Grammar

As with most of the submission to Literotica, the use of incorrect grammar shows a lack of attention in school.

But, then again, if the author is American, it is nothing unusual.

If the author is from another part of the English speaking world, it is a travesty.

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