All Comments on 'You're Mine Ch. 02'

by redheadedslave

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Roxy_SoxyRoxy_Soxyover 13 years ago
Wow

Very hottttt! Like this very much :) more,more!

reyapetreyapetabout 13 years ago

Oh my gosh! Please write more! I am loving this!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
CONTINUITY

she goes from wearing panties to wearing a thong, and also in part one her hands are cuffed, behind her back, so HOW did she take his cock out of his boxers with her hand???? and why does her name change from LANE, to LAND and then back to LANE again....... LOVE the story, but those things made it hard to enjoy it fully...please fix, and continue the story!!!!

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42about 10 years ago
Do you ever.......

...finish anything ? This is an awful way to leave a story hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

o well....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
knocked up

this is so hot ugh, hopefully she gets impregnated, and he breeds her, good job with the story though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Oh man thisbstory makes me so wet! I love ready this story. Read it several times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Shit. Another stupid contract fo "sexual slavery"? And she orgasms being raped?

I like good porn stories. And give some space for "creativity".

But this is hilariously ridiculous.

Some of these "non consent" stories are writen by twelve year old kids.

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