by 32aa
So much foreplay with Valerie but do little action. Finding it a little disappointing. A bait and switch. Look forward to you proving me wrong. Look forward to the wait being worth it.
There is some slow growing and development on Valerie's side that must happen first. Her ex-fiancee hurt her and put a lot of doubt in her about herself.
Trust me.
Don't change anything I love how you pace your stories. Building the characters keeping them real. it's what keeps me reading. THANK YOU for a great 2nd series, I've loved both !