All Comments on 'You're Not a Serial Rapist Ch. 15'

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BruceWoBruceWoover 2 years ago

So much foreplay with Valerie but do little action. Finding it a little disappointing. A bait and switch. Look forward to you proving me wrong. Look forward to the wait being worth it.

32aa32aaover 2 years agoAuthor

Patience. that is a ways down the story.

32aa32aaover 2 years agoAuthor

There is some slow growing and development on Valerie's side that must happen first. Her ex-fiancee hurt her and put a lot of doubt in her about herself.

Trust me.

GoMikeyGoMikeyover 2 years ago

Don't change anything I love how you pace your stories. Building the characters keeping them real. it's what keeps me reading. THANK YOU for a great 2nd series, I've loved both !

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