by 32aa
Another great instalment. Your writing is well put together and pleasant to read. OK, the story moves slowly, but believably, and leaves us looking for the next. Who’s Jessi ???
The reference to 'Jessi' was a mistake. it was a carryover from something that my editor wanted to add to an earlier part of the chapter. I disagreed. In the original manuscript, this paragraph was separated from the main body by over half a page. It got overlooked in the 'proofing', and was not deleted. Sorry about that.
Please disregard my comment about Jessi. You explained it well and I read it after I posted my comment. You have had me hooked on this story from the beginning, and your references to the 70's and the music and the campus unrest I remember all too well. I was #14 in the 1969 Lottery.