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Nicely done. You go girl.

awesome first story. reading this was like watching it taking place right in front of my eyes. now on to the next hot horny story. love this one. you can't stop now.

I loved it, it was great- not bad for a first story! Keep writing! <3

Short, sweet, gorgeous. Well done. Keep up the writing.

Craggy

Good story, keep up the good work :)

Keep up the good work, your writing really shows so much promise and passion

LWG

I think this first one was better then the second, but that's just splitting cunt hairs, they were both good works. I want more as does your lover so keep him happy and the rest of us as well with more!

second paragraph, wrong homophone, "waste" should be "waist" I think. at the very least it cracked me up imagining an anal fisting scene thirty words into a story.