All Comments on 'Zai and Tim Pt. 02'

This is a good story, love it. Can't wait for the next chapter. AAAAA+++++

Fantastic. It will be interesting to see how you carry this on for six more chapters but I can hardly wait.

5*

Tc

really good story can't wait for more

Great! I thought ny the end of this story it was coming to a close. Glad your continuing. TO INFINITY AND BEYOND! Stay tuned for the next episode of, "Zai and Tim". 5 BIG FAT BLACK HOLE STARS!

I don’t know how but you dropped the worm drive explanation in just the right place

Interesting story but the man hating thing is getting old

A wild and crazy ride and I'm looking forward to more.

patiently awaiting the next chapter.

Loved it cant wait for more ..i hope there is more

Hello! I read your story with attention and i’m feeling that you are thinking context and facts but you are not writing them down, a lot of stuff i habe to go back a few lines and try to patch the holes on the plot. Like the Mary thing, lots of stuff went through your head but wrote an abridged version. Also the mom thing is confusing sometimes and have to go back and retrace if you are talking about the queen or about the researcher… also when mary cries and falls tonthe floor is confusing why she actually breaks down and the inner conflict is solved…

In other comments, i don’t think the galaxy divided into two kingdoms with active trade and law abiding cultures, for Centuries now? At least several generations… would have clueless and naive queens regarding sex and politics, such that a “shadow intelligence agency” would have to show up and fix a galaxy wide complot? I believe you don’t get women credit enough. If something, they are not clueless.

Men’s nipples do get erected!!

You have a great imagination and your work has been fun to read. Keep writing so I can continue to enjoy.

Very interesting story 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!