All Comments on 'Zane Wayne Pt. 01'

loved it. looking forward the next chapter.

Enjoying the story. Love the storyline. Picked up on one issue, at least for me. The family leaves for graduation at 10:30 a.m. The ceremony is at 1:00 and lasts 3 hours. Means its over about 4:00. They then go to the diner and "Lunch was fun." Sorry to sound picky but that one jumped out at me.

Great so far. Looking forward to part 2

A Fantastic read after a long long time. Can't wait for part 2

Great follow up to CODY, which is an excellent story. Once again good character development, scenes, pace and good light humor which helps blunt the tough emotional first part of this story.

Looking forward to the next installment.

Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter. Has the nest chapter been written and/or submitted yet? Can you give readers an approximate timeline and how many chapters to expect?

Excellent, looking forward to the next part

The first chapter was captivating. I hope the next part is posted soon.

soo looking forward to the rest of the parts, well built up, keep em coming

I have to concur with Freddog6601 that this is a great follow up to Cody. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. 5*

Congratulations! Cody was a first go and improved page by page. You killed the herione and got out of that quagmire like a master.

Zane promises to have some serious kinks in the tail and I am chewing at the bit for the rest.

Very well done. This is the way to go.

High five!

please write so more soon

When people are asking when and what’s next you know you’re doing something right

Great story so far

Hope to see original rapists Dad get his before too long - meanwhile keep going

Oh I had a crib about someone else who wrote about barrel racing - us Europeans don’t know the details so beware how technical that element gets 5*

An excellent read. Thank you.

Can’t wait for the next part!

Excellent story. Need more...

I really enjoy your plots. I am not a fan of the part where dialogue is in italics and you use colons. I have no idea why you did that. I will be looking for the next chapter. Your story is quite engaging. Thanks for the time and effort you put into this for us readers.

Pretty freaking amazing! Cant wait to read part 2

Excellent romance, l could not put it down. Looking forward to other chapters, l hope there are plenty more. You do write such a great story.

Scores 5/5

Spectacular storytelling, I am so excited to read more.

A good story. I’m really enjoying it. I like it that there’s some tension in the relationship.

I have one quibble. Jake was paroled early, and he has to have regular meetings with his parole officer. He can probably move from Texas to Wyoming for a job, but he’s going to need permission from his parole officer in Texas, and I think Wyoming would have to give permission as well. This is all missing from the story. If Jake did officially move his parole to Wyoming, there’s a good chance that his enemies in Texas can find out where he is. If he’s just skipped out on his parole, then there’s a warrant for his arrest. After a hearing he would be facing a return to prison to finish his sentence.

Part 2 soon? Please!! Great story.

I really enjoy your writing. I was going to bring up the same points as anonymous, about getting out on parole. There is lot more to it than walking our hopping in a truck and moving to another state. By doing that he would have a warrant out for him. If he so much as got pulled over they would arrest him, and extradite him to Texas to serve the remainder of his sentence plus some added on for fleeing. Even if he did set up the move before had he would still have a parole officer to report to for the full time he is on parole, which would be more than likely (because type of offence) set as what remains of the prison sentence time he didn't serve.

So much fun to read. I found this when checked out the author of the newly written Halloween Romance. I couldn't pass up a western theme romance. Best of both worlds. Hope to see more chapters in the near future. Thank You for sharing your talent.

Can't wait for part 2. 5*

A very enjoyable read. Looking forward to to Part 2. Thank you.

Having re-read this chapter, I wondered how a paroled felon was able to leave the state. That's pretty much the only issue I have with the story!

It is well written, and I'm off to read part 2 now.

I enjoy this section of Lit the most and this is the first story in almost a year that I know will hold my attention until the end. Thanks for writing and I hope you continue with future stories.

Outstanding.

Two stories read and reading, and already has become one of favorite authors. Story is great, but the dialogue is exceptional. More bravos.

Gifted writing

Very well written, the “pacing” felt good. I’ve worked with some ex-cons both were very polite, calm and well adjusted. One was in the Texas penal system.

Hopefully the next chapters work well too. Congrats.

In all fairness I hadn’t thought once about Lindsey Father until I reached the end of the story and saw the authors comments, I’m gonna guess there’s a Texas connection there, just because.

Good story, if I’m being picky I’d have liked Ray, Belle and Grams to have been introduced slightly more clearly, I found myself confusing the Ladies with one another, possibly my poor attention to detail tho.

Hahaha! What an oaf!

"So, you are close with your sister?"

"Yes, that's why I took it so hard when SHE WAS RAPED and then I KILLED A MAN and WENT TO PRISON!"

"WTF dude, just say yes..."

Can't wait to read the next part. Hope it works out for them..."WINK". Glad you didn't traumatize us with his time in prison. I feel you must have had a wonderful man in your life that you idolized, your male characters are almost too good to be true. KUDOS!

I love your stories ! Five stars !!

Love the story, much better grammar than most stories but you use site when you mean sight. Although it could be an Americanism! I'm British.

Behind blue eyes was a great story, so is this one

Oh, wow! That was a great first chapter. I hope you have several more planned.

Great story! One small note... there's no such thing as Texas U. It's UT. The only people who call it Texas U are Aggies and people in Tennessee. It is a purposeful insult. Made this Texas girl wince.

Amazing story only thing is how could the DA charge him with first degree murder when it was clearly a crime of passion? First degree is premeditated, not “my sister was raped I’m going over there because I can’t see from the rage”. It would be like “I’m going to plan this whole situation out”