All Comments on 'Zoe, Again'

Erotic & romantic, so good!

Dear Tarnished. You don't reveal your gender, but I cannot see any possibility that you are other than a woman. Your sensitivity to Zoe's inner thoughts is astonishing, something I don't think a man could pull off so well. And your knowledge and comfort with BDSM leads me to believe you indulge.

It’s beautiful.. I was a bit annoyed with myself not realising they are in the wrong order, but that doesn’t detract

This story is timeless. It is so well written and so well sequenced, it draws you in like a funnel draws in water to its center. By the time you get to the end of the story, you wish there was more, but you are so well satisfied, you can pick up your cup of coffee and dream.

I wish I had lost my virginity in such a magical manner.

what next?

Erotic and touching. A great combination.

I only wish some of the imagery could be captured, added to these wonderful words, and displayed here on Literotica.