All Comments on 'Zoe: Queen of the City Ch. 01'

You are such an awesome writer for such a young age. Keep on writing, erotic or otherwise.

This story was right on the money from the get go. Your eye for detail was very enjoyable.

I am putting you up there at the top of my favorite authors.

Loved it! Please write more.

Both of your stories are great. You are truly a gifted writer. I look forward to anything you care to write. I'm anxious to read your next chapters. Thank you.- ChristieP

Great story and really look forward to part 2!

Daphne

You've done it again. This is yet another extremely well-written story that drips sex and keeps the reader involved throughout.

I've just given it a 5. It's the least you deserve

kisses

Claire

more!!!!

Great story told like a master ... um, mistress. (Maybe?) Patiently waiting for chapter 2 and 3 and 4 and well, you get the idea.

Please tell me that the next one is coming out soon

WOW! Can't wait for the next installment

I loved this story and can't wait for the next installments. You write really well with wonderful descriptions and great pace. The trouble is the other stories are equally good and I want more! This is great story telling; you are one of the best writers around.

You have now given us three Chapter Ones and after more than two years there is no sign of anything else. You have left your readers in the lurch and that's not very good. Dear Girl, you can write and you've got a good imagination. I've read each story and I haven't spotted one grammatical or spelling error (apart from what I think were a couple of typos) and I am very good at spotting mistakes. Can I give you one small tip to make your text look better---write numbers as words and not figures, especially smaller numbers. So please, please get to work and produce the next chapters (and ignore anyone who has knocked your work: you have talent).

Brian

All of your stories are very, very good. I wish you would continue, especially this one. Thank you... Soo hott

Such a good story!

Thank you!

L

Fantastic!

Don't worry about those who moan and complain, or those who believe their "cock is a cure" for something that is not wrong! You have a genuine writing talent - I loved this story and the way in which the characters develop.... The mystery as to where it goes next is something I cannot wait to discover.

Gratefully

Corinne x