All Comments on 'Zydeco'

Well done, good lead up, good development, great story flow. You've the talent to create some good erotica.

I was a little bored at the beginning and I felt like it was going to be a cliched erotic story, but your extensive vocabulary and descriptions kept me reading. It was a complete turn around when I got to the encounter and I was glad I kept reading. Great short story and like another person commented, your talent for this is amazing.

My favorite parts though had to be your descriptions and your extensive vocabulary.

What a delicious story. Thank you.

He fulfilled her fantasy and his while being careful to arrive and leave unseen.

Wow, really enjoyed the the planning of this story and the outcome. Great story!