All Comments on 'My Shy Teen Slave Ch. 11.5'

I've really been into this series but this has seriously thrown me.

Hi. This is good writing.... but unfortunately it misses out on Juliet. We'd all love to hear more about her and her dorky master.... which is what we'd tune in day and night waiting to read about...

In terms of writing though, its good. Perhaps as a standalone story or another series?

But seriously, keep it up anyway! Some writing is always better than none!

Although this story threw me a bit, you still have a fantastic skill for writing! Reading about Clark and Juliet is still my favorite by far though. Please don't stop! I find myself thinking about them sometimes when I lay awake or even randomly through the day!

As much as I love Clark and Juliet, I loved having an interim 11.5 series break on Finn and his animalistic behavoir. Clark and Juliet have all the love and gentleness but Finn has the crazy sexy almost sadistic behavoir that is also nice to see in a master. I think you should continue with both series, maybe making Finn one of his own, or coming up in between every few chapters as a break between the loving and caring sub/dom relationship of Juliet and Clark. Love to see more, you're a brilliant writer and by far my favorite series on Lit. Keep it up!

-Storm, a fan

I found this by accident, then I read it all. I'm fascinated by the mixture of sadistic slaver and loving boyfriend. I will keep checking the site for more of this story.

I saw the 11.5 and was confused for a moment, but after reading, it was such a pleasant surprise! I don't get why others are so upset by this, it's just as good, just different. I never knew that Finn was like this, and I love how we got a glimpse into the depth of his character. We certainly saw more than before of him, and the new character, Aubrey, is also amazing. I think this could seriously turn into a spin-off type of story, or maybe it could be integrated into the current one. Maybe Finn and Aubrey together could somehow be included with Clark and Juliet at some point.

As always, I'm so excited for the next chapter. On a side note, seeing my name made my heart leap! Thank you so much for reading your comments, most authors don't.

- Jane