All Comments on 'Patricks Marriage Changes Ch. 06'

Keep 'em rolling

The story was good until the end, no man who loves his wife would want her with another man regardless of how you explain it, and no woman wants her man with others either, except Patrick is being forced Ann would not be..big difference and if she does screw around she's a slut. Anything else is just plain bullshit. Up until that moment the story was pretty good.

I was wondering when the vasectomy was gonna come up. With all the talk about his seed, this twist was so obvious the only surprise would have been if he wasn't sterile. The same with Joan being such a big part of it all. Too obvious.

This story is some of your best work yet. Would have logged in, but can't seem to get it to work.

again great, so much emotion and feeling,

Your story is becoming more and more adsurd. Even the best stories have some link to reality. So get a life and finish this crappy story which is just a thinly disguised way of justifying the fuckin around on each other. Get a life

You managed to fuck the story up again. This is probably the worst storie that I have ever read. I see that a couple of people liked it but they must be related to you.

Totally a thrill to read. Keep up great work.

Nope we are not related.

let bob fuck you,the wimp will show up.these people have fuck your life up and you still fucking with them.get your wife out of there quick as possible.logic of the thinking of the writer makes no sense.

But this seems very similar to a previous story and now it has just gotten weird. You lost my attention in the bizarre nature of your yarn.

I felt I was deceived. Normally, I just leave a story I do not like without comment. Don't suck me in, if this is cheating, polygamy, metasex story, give me a clear hint, or say so in the notes.

burn this story

The story could have gone in so many more palatable directions......the plot has crossed into absurdity.....and to think this had such great potential...tragic

This garbage is the most ridiculous fuckin garbage on this site.

6 long chapters of garbage. A compelling argument for creating a separate section for cuck stories.

My god, what a horrible cuck story this is.

Curious2c you are one sick cuck loving nong.

How you can write such absolute shit is beyond me. No more for me you sick demented cunt.

1/5, should be 0/5