All Comments on 'First Time, Denied'

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masterslave00masterslave00over 7 years ago
Lovely first story...

Love it, been in such situation in RL and can relate to everything you wrote. Is it just fantasy or is there anything you experienced? Looking forward to the next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome!

5+!!!! Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very good story

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very good

Please continue, story is very good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

Love this story and love playing like this. Very well written - plaese continue!!

jackkeatsjackkeatsalmost 5 years ago
Hot

More please... Let me know.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good premise.

But merely repetitious. The same thing over and over.

Three stars.

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