All Comments on 'Trapped and Alone Ch. 05'

Really enjoying this story keep it cumming

do let her have her revenge in the end, so to speak.

The story is well written. She should spend more time in the training camp until she forgets her old identity. So far the plot is well developed.

Would love for her to be returned to her old boyfriend who is the drug dealer's mole and then for that dumbass leave her to her own devices too long and get busted as the mole.

Would love to see her in high heels. ... sweet

enjoying this well conceived story.

I can't wait to read the follow-on. I like cops being punished and humiliated. Keep writing, your story is well conceived and enthralling to read.

I wasn't sure at first if I would like the story... only because I'm not usually into the bondage thing. But you really have me hooked. The story is great and writing is great. The illustrations are super and really add the the story.

I sure hope there is more to come.

More humiliating foe Nathalie would be the introduction of a black domne who will teach her respect for black people and that they matter, too. And for her to submissively serve her every needs as well as the Arabic males of her race without resisting. Even more would be her thanking them for every cocktail crop applied on her.

I finally got to read the whole story and I loved it. Didn't think I would, but it is well written and the illustrations are superb. The two of you have done great as a team and now can't wait to see another chapter. Keep up the great work and let us all know what happens to the slutty cop!!!

I like slave stories anyway, but this one grabbed my attention right from the beginning and held it all the way through. I am really looking forward to seeing how it continues.

If I could make one slight suggestion it would be that it seemed she gave into the pain orgasm a little too fast. I would have like hearing how she struggled with it more before finally succumbing and giving in to enjoying it. But in reality people always think they would last far longer during torture than they actually would. Especially women.

Do you have any new chapters for "Trapped" or are you currently spending all your time on "Jesse"?

but will be sometime in April spoiler...some new characters will be introduce..

It is perfect .well done . In the next parts she should be pierced tattooed or even punished with animal sex the Arabic horse. Alot of ideas are comming up. Till the next part

I can only say it's an almost perfect story. All undercover cops should be sold as slaves! I agree she needs to be taught who's the boss. She needs to be tattooed, pierced and branded as all slave cops should be.

To add to her humiliation she should find out her ex boyfriend and the drug dealer are in on her enslavement but it's too late to do anything about it. Also she should go back to work eventually but her status in the police department is now lower. Her ex boyfriend and new owner should force her into humiliating situations at work and with her friends and family as he gets his revenge.

...first, as a heterosexual male, I am turned in by the sex in the story, but as a human being, the treatment of the female drug agent is abhorant to me. Perhaps if I lived in the culture of the land where the story takes place, I would be less appalled. But I don't, so I am!! (5***** nevertheless, because of the excellent artwork!)

Love it. Don't keep her away from her former colleagues, you can either invite the male ones to profit or the female ones to join. Better even invite everybody.

Neighbors, friends, enemies all of them have a right to see her!

Big Fan please update the story

Surely you are not done. Great illustrations and good story that would be better if the agent were not so incredibly stupid. Maybe she can attain some wisdom up on the platform there.

I found your story extremely good, I recommend it.

I want to see what happens next. Please continue as I love your artwork.

For some reason our detective gets released, and dropped off back home. Maybe a deal was made. But now she is a changed woman and craves submission, and to be sexually used. She has "adventures" to satisfy her new cravings.

I like every one of your stories but I think Trapped and Alone is your best. I hope you'll carry on and tell us what other Humiliations and training awaits Nathalie

Nathalie will be subjected to more abuse at the hands of black woman who will mercilessly crop her breasts and pussy until she is the throes of an intense pain/pleasure orgasm while being tied slayed on the wall. Then the black woman will call for more black men to line up to fuck and impregnate her. Key to this successful fuck session would be her accepting her abuse and apologize for her inner racism to black men by giving each her heartfelt thanks and a deep kiss with her tongue submissively swirling over their tongues in her mouth. The black woman will free her from bondage and make her submissively please her frothing black curtains and buy her for the princely sum of one dollar to take her home and make her a lesbians slave forever while having her fuck only black male friends of hers.

Hi

You said the next chapter would be coming out last April. Please continue as I am a huge fan of your stories.

Please continue the story.

Outstanding story! Please continue!

I have many request to continue. Chapter 6 submitted and should be posted with in a week or 2.

Where's chapter 6..............

I submitted about a month ago and they still has not posted it. I try to contact them but no response.

So good!

The admin. may have lost it somehow.

Or, they may have decided that they don't like this story.

As I understand the rules, Non-consent requires that the victim learn it like it. Am I wrong about this?

2 months and they finally got back to me saying they can't find it. This time I sent it to the server and as well as email. So cross fingers and hope. If not I am out and never posting here again!

Just letting you know that many people appreciate your great stories and fantastic artwork. Thanks for all the effort you put into your stories.

Where would you post if they don't continue your story.

Please have your beautiful ladies be using men but not hurting