All Comments on 'Man, I Feel Like a Woman Ch. 07'

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Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meover 7 years ago
Ok...

I'm hooked. Aside from some a couple grammatical and spelling errors, it's damned good.

Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Keep it going

I'm enjoying the story. Please keep it up. C7A1

StrixalucoStrixalucoabout 2 years ago

This really needs editing. It's not just some grammar errors - at points it feels like the writer was way too tired.

The alternate university doesn't seem entirely coherent, either.

I would also rather place this in fantasy rather than nonhuman category.

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