All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 001'

Very intriguing! When was the house built?

What was there before?

How did the "residents" arrive?

What's in the basement? The attic?

Will we learn more about the two aunts?

Neighbors? The pizza girl? Perhaps an expert? And the agent?

Can't wait to read more!

-Sten

Quite enjoyed this, and looking forward to more.

Great interesting beginning of a story... I hope it turns into a novella.

Outstandingly erotic. I loved it. Must have more. What a wonderful house.

Very engaging from the first sentence. Good ending by leaving the readers wanting more. Not too short or too long.

Readers will have lots of questions, more details about his background, his aunt's lack of a relationship with his mother, why there are "monsters" in this house, etc.

I'm looking forward to your subsequent chapters. I'll tag you as a favorite author so I'll know when you post the new chapters.

With your writing style and a regular uploading schedule this could be amazing. Ka Pai

A very fine first effort. Good for you. I agree with the previous comments. Don't worry about answering all the questions. Let it flow and it will be very good.

Waiting with anticipation!!!

Very good stuff, I love your writing style and this series could have me coming back for more, keep at it :)

Engaging right from the start!

I'm impressed. No obvious grammar or spelling errors, good world and character building, and a solid concept that I've not seen before. Bravo!

Love it. The creatures will give him more length and width and pheromones that will attract Beth , Dana and every female he encouters. All female could be available for him in every way he desires. Also giving him the stamina to be with at least 20 females at the same time and several times with each one. Even mother's daughters etc.

Waiting for more. Keep it up.

I loved this first chapter. Others have commented on the good bits and how well written it is, and I agree completely. It's a wonderful start and te story concept holds so much promise.

I note from your biog notes that you have just plucked up the courage to submit this story after some time as a reader. I, for one, am grateful that you decided to take the plunge.

I also note that you are submitting chapters as you write. That's a bold move and I wish you well with it. Readers can become impatient waiting for the next chapter. If there is a matter of weeks between submissions, may I suggest a summary of the story to date at the beginning of each chapter?

When writing and submitting as you go, it is easy to write yourself into various alleys where it is difficult to imagine the next chapter to get your characters out of a dead end. (I ended up in a bad one, and a couple of other authors at the moment seem to be in difficulties. Life In Vil with his willing slave and Jessica Von Harper with her nudist schoolgirl are just two examples.)

I look forward to the next chapter,

Lue

This is really interesting. I like the story, I hope you continue it.

I will be keeping an eye on this.

I like the main character, premise, and especially writing style. Please continue this series, and if other stories have the same writing style i have no doubt theyll be just as good.

Looking forward to the next one.

Thank you.

Oh, welcome to literotica and please try to ignore the trolls.

You flesh out the beginning of this short story nicely skillfully describing the subtle details of the plot; the premise, the situation, the house and it's contents, the broker. But then you neglect the "nymph" and the sexual interaction. I think I would offer a bit less detail in the buildup and a bit more in in the interaction. Otherwise well done; I look forward to see where this is going.

Really enjoyed the read and looking forward to more chapters

Keep up the good work!

Great work thus far. Really had me captivated from the start. I would like to have liked alittle more information about his past like why his mother was unemployed, why she sought to tease her own son and how she died but it's not mandatory. Great build up and great plot. When I saw this I didn't think anything of it but you really pulled me in just from the start of this. I can't wait to see how this develops. Don't stop here. There is definitely potential in this story.

Good work so far, lots of options to work with. empathetic character, great story environment. And, as has been said elsewhere, screw the trolls. They are suckers of life force, contributing nothing. Carry on! Enthusiasm is to be cherished.

The community here has been simply wonderful in their response and enthusiasm! Thank you for your kind words and support. I've been making sure to write a little every night just for you guys!

I will be submitting Chapter 2 this weekend, but find out how you can see it early on my website www.patreon.com/sexyannabelle

You have talent - keep writing! 5 stars.

Just loved it. Keep writing. Can't wait for the next parts to publish.

Very well written Annabell please continue writing. Loved the first chapter just about to read the second. X

great setup for the rest of the story -- a 5 for you

Five stars for you, you deserve it. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Please continue, I look forward to experiencing more of your work.😀😀😀

Interesting new vision. Timing and pace are great, and I want one in my bathtub!

good first effort. I expect to see more!

Masterfully crafted story that keeps get better.

Loved it so far

Well written I can tell you have a great interest in the supernatural as well

Exploring what relatives leave for next generation, like the beginning.

Hey all!

If this is your first time here, then welcome! Home for Horny Monsters is going to become a book! If you would like to be notified when it releases, please send me a feedback form with your email address!

If you simply can't wait, consider supporting my Patreon. Gain immediate access to all of the currently available chapters, artwork of many of the characters, and a special Patreon-Only Edition of the Home for Horny Monsters eBook before it hits Amazon. You can find me at Patreon.com/sexyannabelle

Everyone on Lit has been simply amazing, and regardless if you buy the book or support my Patreon, the final chapter will be posted here on Lit, so stay tuned!

That was excellent. Truly excellent. The opening section set up the main character and premise in a very enjoyable way that managed to avoid being an awkward info dump. The meeting with the pizza delivery girl opened up necessary insights into our main character's background and personality, and made me really care about him.

As for the sex... Well, as someone who likes a long soak myself, I've got to say I think it was awesome. The hunger is palpable and the fantasy elements expertly handled. This is excellent stuff. On to part 2!

It sounds like his personality fits in line with both previous owners of the home. Private, solitary, singularly alone. But, if he is the first male occupant of the mansion, how did the water nymph get an infusion of her healing elixir? Is each room graced with such welcoming Specters?

daily task done

I binged all 12 chapters in one morning, just coming back to let you know how great of a story you wrote.

Great intro. I look forward to seeing this story grow.

Great start. Glad I came late to the party plenty to read.

Glad I just found this, many more chapter already to read now ♥️

This is one of the best stories I have had the pleasure of reading in a long time. I really really hope it continues! Thank you!

I just finished Ch 1 and can't wait to read them all. Very interesting concept.

I'm so reading the rest and waiting for more I hope!

Between you and Tefler, Literotica is really gathering some real Literature! Such an improvement over the usual illiterate and mundane stroke pieces!! I'm one of those guys who can't read a story after an author mixes up pair and pear or some other such needless error. ._.

So please accept my anonymous thanks! And now go write more 'cause I'm gonna go binge read all the rest of this series! Moar!! :D

Just finished up through Ch 17.

You really develop feelings for the characters.

The story line is sensible and believable within this genre.

If this was a physical book, you would not be able to put it down!

I am so sorry! I hit the 1 star when I meant 5. This is a great start.

I absolutely loved this chapter and will binge read the rest for sure! As a writer myself I love this idea you’ve created! I’d love to have an opportunity to write along side you or someone like you one day! Mazel tov!!

Loving this so far ... "author - author " !!

love it hurry with chapter 20. .21

I just discovered you due to the Nude Day 2018 contest. I decided to begin at the beginning. This is a sweet, enchanting story but complex too with the way the man is a damaged person. I like it a lot. Five stars.

I hope it keeps going so he can meet the women from the film

And start having a relationship with her. And the pizza girl

Great story so far love it . sore would be 65 . you have great talent

Thank you for sharing your story with us DC.Cowboy

Just finished chapter 28 of the story. Sad that I have to wait for the next chapter

Such an incredible story so far

Chapter 1 was interesting enough to make me move on to Chapter 2. I am not a huge fan of reading fantasy type stories, I prefer them in movie form but I like this so I will keep on reading.

I'm really enjoying your story. I think you're doing a wonderful job of mixing creative fantasy creatures with truly erotic sex scenes. I read through about chapter 17, then had to stop (life happened!) and am now reading from the beginning again to re-familiarize myself with the characters, and I think I'm enjoying it even more the second time around. I won't give away my favorite parts here, as so not to spoil it for new readers, but will comment later. Keep up the great work.

This is fantastic drawing me in to read more.

I really hope this is something you plan to keep writing.

Because I actually enjoyed reading it.

the set up is great. It's different. I'm wondering what lore and creatures. Myths legands your gonna bring into it and what his life is gonna be like in the town as well

Looking forward to spending many a evening enjoying your work :)

I dont normally leave reviews but this was an incredible first chapter :D

Okay, that was pretty sweet, although one teeny tiny detail I to say. You had the lawyer wearing boots in one part which I found odd due to her attire, then heels in another part. I'm not trying to take away from the awesomeness of this story. Just something that caught my eye.

Umm, boys don't enter puberty before the age of 13 - 14 in most cases. So, it is physically impossible for him to have an erection at the age of 11.

to the comment elow mine boys can have erections before eleven, i can remember being nine in sex education and i got an erection and when i talked to others in my class they said they got an erection as well

It was a good read and a good start to a series I most definitely want to continue reading. I actually want to write a similar story with basically the same plot. But with only ghost girls instead of different monsters.

Looking forward to more of them.

Good character development, scene setting, etc!

Go Annabelle!

dont end a story where a conversation should begin

other than that, prety good start

Almost at this chapter's 2 year anniversary, so heartfelt congratulations to you dear Annabelle, and a toast to many more to come!

Starting a reread of this Wonderful Story series!

What a great idea , the possibilities are endless ! :)

Heads and shoulders above most of the writing on this site. Am starting to re-read all chapters now, so good. To all you new readers out there, check out the authors Patreon page, she's awesome. very engaged with the fans, and commissions all sorts of art of the hot monster babes for us to drool over! You also get to see the chapters way earlier than the Lit crowd. :P So support the author if you enjoy! :D

I think one of the best stories, here or anywhere......couldn’t stop reading....thank u.

This is well written and engaging, and the sex scenes are exciting! I'm already hooked, wondering about what comes next!

Well written, good start on an imaginative world. Please continue with this story.

Ran across your stories and thought I’d give the first chap a read. Well done! I look forward to reading the other chapters and supporting your writing via patreon and/or Amazon.

I'm posting after reading all the way through - lots of fun and steam! Thx!

Great idea for a story line. Found you as a favorite of another author here. Thanks! I'm in for a bit

Wow I wish I could write stories as good. You are able to put me right in the scene. Love the thought of being there! What,s the secret of your ability? I have written a few sexy letters, but, not even as good.

Alan

Excellent start.

Really looking forward to reading more.

Many thanks for sharing this with us...

Really liked your other stories so starting with a 5 on these , seem to be missing something but not sure what.

George

Love the start of these stories will no got to read the rest, good work!

Wow, good character development

The hook is set, you can reel me in.

Going back and re-reading the first chapter, it's interesting to think about how in a way it was Dana that set everything in motion. Without her, Mike most likely wouldn't have gone to the tub when he did, so he wouldn't have met Naia and then he would have most likely sold the house. The denizens of the house, in a way, have Dana to thank for their good luck.

Wow. Great writing, and a great concept. And extremely hot too.

What's mindblowing is there are 59 more chapters to read: what a delightful prospect for the holidays! Thank you!

FUCK! WRITTER ANNABELLA

THIS IS MY THIRD OR FORTH TIME READDING HFHM!

I just read your intro, maybe for the first time or just realized for the first time ( my Grand Dad always said I was a little thick) this was your first story. Atleast for Literotica! LOL

SUM-A-BEACH YOU ARE GOOD!

For some reason I think of you as being very similar in looks and mannerisms to Beth!

Thank you for sharing your gifts with us, keeping us aroused and entertained!

justjhawkins@gmail.com

I recognized I was hooked at the start of the second page. This is great writing, great development and fascinating. This is fun. I'm on board.

THANKS

You're definitely a very good writer. I liked the write style and it was fun to read! It was fun from the first sentence on!

Love the story, Good pace, visuals are clear.

I am hooked by any story with magic and monsters in the modern / current time.

Well done!

The description of the tub was terrific. Made me visualize it . Quite the intriguing start for the story. So many ways to take this.

So this is where it all began huh?

Bet Annabelle had no idea that she was about to become one of the best fantasy story writers on the entire litrotica site when she started this series!

Your imagination is one in a million Anna, I personally love this series!

I'm intrigued.

Are all your stories set in the same world? Like a shared universe?

I liked it very much...5 stars

This is a girl's opinion so don't be grossed out guys.......

I personally would not have minded to see a solo masturbation scene where Mike strokes his long thick erection and empties his creamy ropes of pent up frustration right into the tub as the water nymph spies on him while playing with her pussy for the very first day instead of her showing up and forcefully deep throating Mike's big cock just as he was about to blow his precious load. She should have been introduced on the second time Mike played with his meaty member in the bathtub. I just wanted to see Mike lewdly erupting and turning the water in the tub milky white before the girls got involved.

Then again, the sight of such a handsome and healthy young man jerking his massive log of man meat as he moans and groans in pure pleasure and ecstasy while bringing himself closer and closer to shooting slimy fat ropes of pungent fertile baby batter inside the domain of her bathtub after such a long time must have been too much for the horny water nymph to take. Every single delicious drop of creamy white drop of cum in Mike's big soft balls must have seemed as holy water to her, no wonder she swallowed all of it like a good little girl as Mike's balls constricted, as his virgin anus was winking and his firm sexy ass cheeks were clenching and unclenching in orgasm. I like the fact that she was thorough about it as well and proceeded to immediately ride Mike and pull the rest of his cock snot out of his fat nuts and satiate his lust with her no doubt tight pussy hole.

Mike's big cock will have plenty of company if this continues.

Well I never, how could she...........

That was quite a sudden and invasive breach of privacy. What a naughty water nymph! She should have respected the naughty alone time Mike was enjoying and allowed him to relieve himself inside the bathtub before formally introducing herself.

If was Mike I would have grabbed her head firmly and stood on my tiptoes before plunging my cock right down her throat and grinded my hips slowly and deliberately against her face while staring down into her eyes. I would have called her a cum hungry slut and cock starved whore while my cock bucked and jerked inside her throat feeding her life giving fertile ball goo. That would have definitely taught her a lesson.

Pretty decent start i must say, lets see if it holds up in chapter 2.

I just checked your profile and realised that it might take me a couple weeks to catch up to the latest chapter.

Not terrible...

This is next one my reading list, seems like a promising start, no overt typos is a huge plus.

-Diakron

Well, the Water nymph didn't waste any time getting to know the new owner of the house did she. I think her monster type is a fine choice for the first girl Mike encountered. Tame and harmless in appearance but magical and mesmerising at the same time. I can only assume the monster girls are gonna be wilder and more dangerous as the series progresses. That's something I'm really looking forward to and I hope you won't disappoint.

FYI Annabelle

I'm using this chapter's sexual encounter as fap fuel tonight when I'm stroking one out in my bathtub. Hope you don't mind.

She stuck her finger up his asshole?

Damn Annabelle, you are a kinky one aren't you.

Great first chapter! The level of detail really pulled me into the story. I love fantasy so this is right up my alley. I really like the fact that the protagonist is suffering from repressed sexuality. I think that gives the story some interesting stakes. Looking forward to reading the rest!

Not a bad start, hopefully the next chapter is a good followup to this one. I have come across many sci fi series on this site and many were disappointing or unfinished.