All Comments on 'Willing Target'

Fucking amazing. Part two pls

Great story.

Hahaha, my name is Danny, killed me. I knew it was the wrong guy but God was that good. Are you gonna call the cops? I'd rather make you breakfast. Classic.

I had a feeling that Hannah may have set her up as a joke or something. The twist being that she was in the wrong place, was the best part of the story. Aside from that, I loved the sex scene and I really enjoyed the build up. This was definitely worth the read. Well done.

das fucked up

you were losing me a little with the long build up but the ending was totally worth it. loved the twist at the end. great story thanks for sharing!

nice

Not sure who i fantasized being more Danny or Vicky.

I liked the first part of the story and could see them sitting in the cafe as they chatted away. Fly on the wall time for me.

Then into the second part of the story. Obviously as soon as we arrived at the weird spacing between the 105 and Gentech Road you knew she was going to end up with the wrong guy. But that didn’t spoil the story it just added to the anticipation of how you were going to finish it. Even though you knew he had to enjoy it for the story you still came up with a nice finish. Once again the action was in my mind.

I liked the response from Hannah best when she said “I’m going around now to fill in for you.” I don’t know whether you intended the “fill in” as I read it or whether it’s just my mind.

Wow that was amazing. I loved the twist at the end, absolutely hilarious. I caught the little hints you dropped and it just made reading the end all the more worth it.

You are my favorite author and this easily is one of your best... I have read it no less than a dozen times and it always brings me such pleasure... you have some talent, please keep doing what you’re doing!!!!

Thanks for taking the time to write it Xtina, this very happy reader is looking forward to anything else you write!

I had a feeling on page two she was with the wrong boy. It was just kind of predictable and even easier to tell when he kept refusing to give in. Now, predictable doesn't exactly mean bad. Loke is predictable in all the Thor movies, but he's still amazing. This is an amazing work and I will most likely read again and recommend, I just couldn't help but point it out. Please don't think I'm a jerk or something, I just feel that, as a fellow writer and lover of non consensual futa, I should say something. Please keep up the great work.

Great piece of erotica, love the whole NonCon sequence and eventual submission. The twist at the end was a perfect way to end it. Keep writing!!

Love the story. Bit curious why her key fitted his lock if he was the wrong guy? Maybe I missed something?

Still a good story, though.

Also @Wistan lol she took Danny's own key from under his doormat, the key was already his, just hidden

In ANY case, damn good story.

I've read this before. Still love it.

I was surprised I'd not already commented. Your writing is wonderful storytelling. I adore writers when they let the reader into their characters' thoughts and feelings. The sex scene was mmmmarvelous. The pretend domination, the unwilling submission, and the experienced fucking bringing both of them to a sweaty, sticky paradise.

I enjoyed the whole non-con fantasy setup. The way it played out was delicious. The twist at the end, at least for Vicky, was priceless. It kinda shifted toward romance, in a dominatingly sweet and tender please-take-me-again kind of way.

I have to wonder what this story might look like if written from Danny's point of view.

Sort of felt like i knew the ending was gonna be like that but it was cute at the end with them cuddling

You are a goddess of this genre. You know that, right?

I just totally love this story! Thanks a million!

Ok your specialty seems to be writing giant cocked douchebag trannies. I get that it was suuposed to be a scene a fake rape, but she was nowhere near apologetic enough and he was happy as a clam. This in fact though unintentional was a real rape. Hed be totally tramatized and probably physically injured. She didnt even ask if he was ok. Awful. Mucn more satisfying if he got a pipe, golf club or basball bat and worked her over a bit. Nothing too serious maybe just a shot to the balls, then when she incapasitated a rolling pin shoved up her ass. The only redeeming quality was the mistaken identity aspect.

It's a surprisingly cute story. I really hope you make a sequel just so we can read about the awkward morning and find out where they go from there.

Wrong address, right boy. This made me drool...

This is rape. The end of the story rushed and why the hell was he so relaxed making “her” a breakfast? Really he should have given her the option.... Face justice or do whatever the hell I want from you

The ending was weak. She raped him and he began to like her that very instant?

For all the,"This is rape" comments, this category is non-con.

Thanks captain obvious.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

This is why, in such a scenario, you need to get the identity of the person right. How difficult is it to make sure you have the correct name? And how hard is it to do that before you penetrate someone, rather than after the fact?

The door was locked, and when you're able to find the key under the mat that is not the same as an unlocked door. You need to confirm the identity in that situation. Actual rape is illegal and very wrong.

That was hot 🔥🔥

And the twist at the end made it hotter yet!