All Comments on 'Drooling Genius Ch. 02'

Thanks for revisiting this narrative. This was VERY hot. Maybe Gunne or Lily has a sister...?

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“You dont accept me fucking before marriage and now we’re not going to be friends!” Fuck me sideways.

Then to compound matters, this “best friend” enslaves her because she likes the power, even though she just wanted her to apologize....of all the juvenile, mind-numbing, iq-decreasing bullshit I’ve had to slog through, this irritated me because it started off pretty fucking good and ended exactly as every other story here.

Thanks for living down to expectations.

I’ve really enjoyed this story

Fun story. There are some good small touches, like having Ginny respond in monotons after Lilly left the restaurant. I like the idea of Lilly or Ginny having a sister too. I also think this story needs a bit more of Ginny drooling, given the title :) Good job and keep it up!

Add a new girl every chapter. You got some great girls you can play around with before and honestly I'd like to read more play with them before too many characters start to clog up the story/speed of the story. It takes more time to say what three people are doing than one

If things work perfectly, it makes for a boring story.

These stories are about power.

Power corrupts.

Absolutely do make that struggle the big deal of the story.

You have a girl with repressed tendencies that will want more girls.

Power by proxy is very corrupting.

She asks but he has the control so both can feel like it was the others "fault" as excesses are exceeded.

Work on where this story needs to go and have fun.

Just a hint. If readers start to hate the story they will often love it much more deeply once they get it.

I am IMPRESSED! You were able to capture the feel of a mind controlled sex slave scene while keeping everything clearly consensual. Love it!

I loved this story.hope to read more of this story.

Hoping for a chapter 3

Great story! Can’t wait for the next submission.

This needs more chapters added.

I am a bit mesmerized by your writing skills here. The way you made it consensual despite it having a pinch of Master- Slave relationship, spinned with hypnosis and domination, it's accurate to say that I am blown away.

Keep it going would love some more chapters what will happen to poor Lilly now that at she is a slave to her girlfriend and her Master

I loved it, more parts needed. This story needs to continue

This is good. The only thing wrong is the absence of more chapters.