All Comments on 'TRANCE, Inc. 03: The Boss'

Very good story, keep up the great work

Can't wait to see more!

thanks for a great read.

Great story hope next chapter isn't far way

great story

was getting getting worried i wouldnt see more of ya, JC.

Quality stuff.

My first read on this website was one of your stories and boy am I glad that you were the first. After spending a little more time here I realized how rare it is to find someone as talented as you are in writing. I've already read everything you've posted on this website and eagerly await more!

Great story!

Your stories kick ass. Please don’t stop writing them

so far. Might I request a little more backstory on the players, the conditions of the trigger phrases, what other suggestions he's given them in the meantime, etc.. Also, to me anyway, they seem a little short in length, barely over a page long. I'd be really happy to have some longer chapters with more character development. Or, is it your intention to make these just short stroke stories?

Thank you so so so much! I want to respond to every single one of your comments but I worry it would clutter up the page so I just want to say that I truly appreciate you taking the time to tell me when a story of mine was enjoyable to you. When I feel worried that my writing is terrible or I'm exhausted from a long day and don't feel like hitting the keyboard your words keep me going. I love writing stories for you, but sometimes it takes your kind words and support to remind me!

Cheers!

P.S. Submitting the next story tonight. It'll be live as soon as the Literotica gods see fit. Can't wait to see what you think!

I agree with one of the other comments regarding backstory. It would be interesting to learn how Chance recruited his first 3 girls. But now having Victoria under his control things should really open up for him.

I appreciate the feedback. You wouldn't believe how irritating it can be to get critiques from people who are simply obnoxious about it, so I'm grateful you took the time to make your input palatable!

Regarding the length of the stories, my goal is to make them short enough for a sitting (or a stroking? :P XD) but also engaging. I'm submitting the 4th "episode" tonight and it's quite a bit longer and includes more backstory into how the original trigger phrases were planted in Chance's women. I thought it would be a better idea to write shorter stories to start out to see if people like them, and then devote more energy to the tales if they are enjoyed. It seems that they have been well-received! Huzzah!

I just found the other preliminary chapters. Great series overall.

Very creative and enjoyable concept. Looking forward to see where you take it.

Loving this series so far!

I really love this series hope for a new ch soon

'cause it was

Like Chance, I too am ready for more ;)

Thank you for sharing it.

You can help me...

Hey! It's JC, and I'm here to ask for your professional support.

Have you enjoyed reading my web novels? Do they give you hours of entertainment? Then please consider supporting the artist who wrote them.

If each person who read all the way through one of my novels paid $3-6 (about the price of a bag of potato chips, and less than half the cost of a paperback book) then I would be able to continue writing indefinitely. As it is, my current trajectory will have me drastically cutting down on my writing volume within the next 6 months.

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Across the world, to wherever you are, you have my deepest thanks and my heartfelt gratitude.

With much love,

JC

Awesome

Phenomenal, I’d like them a little longe rebut these are great

Great stuff, 5/5