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What an outstanding piece of work. The way this is written makes it stand out from the rest. This piece finds me wondering how exciting the exsperience would be . fantastic job. Keep writing!

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That's what I might call an Ice-Burn Arousal:

soooo steamy hot, and yet chillingly cold.

I'm afraid I wouldn't get very far in this potential correspondence. In real life, I need mutual connection and possession; but even in fantasy, I would want to know your side of the experiences, at least. It could still be all about me giving up control to you, but I'd want to know what is it about me that keeps you fascinated, what value you pull from what I share with you.

That being said, if I'm analyzing it this much, it means you've written a concept so tantalizing that I can't get it out of my head. And you've written it very well: the pacing, the repetition, the wordplay, the buildup... *Sigh* yes, spot-on.