by SpankedMan65
can't wait to read part 2 , 3 and 4.
thanks for sharing
New thing here on feedback.
Pin the ass as far as I can tell.
Anyway, Nice story beginning. It’s well written with good setting and characters. I felt like I fell through a hole in the porch though when it stopped so abruptly. I’m looking forward to more installments. Welcome to Lit and congrats on your first story here.
It's a decent start, but if I had a dollar for every "decent start" that appears here--only to be lost and forgotten by the author and readers alike--I wouldn't have to work.
If you actually write more of this story, I'll read it. I'm not holding my breath, however. And while you laid the foundation for the story to continue, it was a very brief introduction that contained nothing sexual...
Sitting on the porch with this large strong woman, I a 17 year old boy, much smaller in stature, obviously immature for my age, dressed in short pants, legs smooth and devoid of hair, her hand on my very bare knee and explaining how things were going to be as well as pointing out to me exactly what might get me into hot water with her, emphasizing these points with a sqeeze of said knee as she stared into my innocent fearful eyes. I was wondering what it was going to be like when I misbehaved and whether I would end up over her knee sans pants and undies and how her rough calloused hands would feel while harshly reddening up my posterior for my youthful disobedience. Mmmmmm. I was game for the game and would get lost in the woods. Hurry with more, SM65 ...