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Nancy's Descent

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by Anonymous

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Good start!

Kinda short.

A single page is just a tease.

Please continue.

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by zena9907/01/18

Nice Start

I believe this shows quite a bit of promise. Looking forward to future installments.

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We write slow burn stories as well, and there are quite a few of us who enjoy reading them. Keep up the good work, and we can't wait to see where this goes!

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by Anonymous07/01/18

please continue

Hope you continue the story

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by sexymomma5707/01/18

Love it

I love the way this is going. Can’t wait for the next chapter

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by Anonymous12/04/18

Like

Very good

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by Anonymous01/30/19

Keep going

The only comment I have is concerning the paragraph length. A bit shorter is an easier read. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

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by Justine_Bishop01/31/19

Thanks!

Thanks for your feedback everybody! Too short, and shorter paragraphs. Noted.

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