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All Comments on 'New Side of Her Best Friend'

by thruster315

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kafkafalmost 6 years ago
Not bad, but...

Good story, but your grammar is all over the place. Some sentences make no sense whatsoever. Get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
thought there'd have been more....

Not bad...needs an editor... thought the girls might have swapped, even if just for oral, and found the end WAY too tame.... where was Terese's "kinkiness"?? Chapter 2 would be a great idea IF you can ramp this up!!

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