by TheOtherTeacher
So happy to see you’ve continued the story. You definitely left me wanting more!!!
Thanks for your feedback. I'm planning to finish my viral series (2 more parts) then return to this series. I think I'll wrap this series up too, in 2 or 3 parts. I've left it too long between episodes and lost some of my interest. So I want to finish it correctly then work on a new idea, or maybe revisit my Jedi mind control idea.
Thank you for updating us but please get back on this. We are all hanging on waiting to finish this brilliantly written story.
If Tani was going to be gone so quick then what was the point of her being there at all? Doesn't seem like it really did anything to further the plotline. I feel like that characyer should have added a lot more to the story (at least in my humble opinion).
Glad you picked Jeff.
Excited as we get near the end.
Hope you have another series.