All Comments on 'This Is My Test Story'

by Manu

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EclecticReaderEclecticReaderover 5 years ago
Your best yet!!!

Thanks for sharing.

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
PERFECT PUNCTUATION

submitting a rhetorical statement TK U MLJ LV NV

rjordanrjordanover 5 years ago
Works for me

I liked the lack of character development consistent with the lack of characters.

luedonluedonover 5 years ago
Emotion perfectly expressed

The exclamation mark following 'sorry' really makes the story. It would have been dull and lifeless if it had been omitted.

Lue

Bebop3Bebop3over 5 years ago
Five Stars

Manu, you are a master of understatement and brevity.

Excellent job.

acupacupover 5 years ago
Really

How long did you agonize over the plot?

Is there a sequel?

Would it be worth adding to my favorites?

TeemuphillipsTeemuphillipsover 5 years ago
Keep writing

With this initial effort, you have shown yourself to be a superior writer, easily surpassing 95% of those that post here. You have not switched tenses midway through you story, you have not written in the first or second persons, and you have not split infinitives. You obviously proofread your work as I found no spelling errors and you have not confused to, too, and two. There are no misuses of “their” and you have no confusing dialog. Well done!

TeemuphillipsTeemuphillipsover 5 years ago
Test comment

Test comment

EricOmroEricOmroover 5 years ago
Wrong catagory

This clearly belongs in "How-to."

Actually, a way to test submissions like this would be a great idea.

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