by GriffonRyder
You hit all the right notes for me, the characterization of Mo'tul and Jarva was great, and really added to the hotness when they finally came together. I would definitely read more from you!
The character and world development was well written this is easily the best stories I’ve read, and i wish there was more content like this. Keep up the good work and I cannot wait to see more of this story (if you decide to continue the storyline) in the future.