All Comments on 'Don't Come'

And I want to hear more from these two!

Thanks! I'm sure you will...

If she came she better be punished! more pls

I was having fun with the 750 word limit - climaxing right at the end...

Uh huh huh! This was hot! Wow. But they said in the other story something about just drinking coffee, and this was _not_ just drinking coffee :-O

Oh wow. I’m gonna add you to my reading list.

I missed the 750 challenge the first year, but had at that time just discovered there was a lower limit to Lit stories without knowing what the limit was. Pussy Lips was originally shorter than 750 and then I added a section and it got accepted. Don't Come was my first deliberate 750 story, I think. It's part of the Ali timeline but not one of the Cafe tales.