All Comments on 'See the Shot, Take the Shot Pt. 02'

I for one appreciate seeing the word rape attached to one of these stories. Too often there is the fantasy world disconnect in mind control stories, but this one relates directly to take by force and I wa glad to see it described as such. Keep up the good work.

Next chapter add some cops in to the story.

Don't listen to the haters. It's a popular and well conceived story. Keep it up.