All Comments on 'Ice'

You should really learn the formula for circumference before you give the diameter of a ridiculously sized cock and make it even more bullshit than it was by claiming it was 14" long. Nevermind the fact that it couldn't possibly fit inside a woman, as vaginas and wombs simply don't work the way this child author thinks they do

way to short good start though and um I wish guys dicks were that big but.. they usually aren't.

Funny, sort of like a Parody of a real Literotica story...

rushed, ludicrously juvenile in theory and it went from decent opening to full throttle in two sentences lol

14 inches and 4 inches around and he just rammed it in with barely any warm up OUCH- COME ON! Also quim??? NO

Who are these haters that bother reading a story like this just to talk shit? Great story!!

This was written 15 years after the first garbage story of yours I read was. Amazingly, you are still clueless. Dicks aren't 14 inches long in real life. Yet this one is, it's rock hard, and just goes instantly inside of her on the ice. Doggystyle on the ice with skates on, and they're just going at it switching positions. Her "Quim" or "Love tunnel" is amazingly wet at some point , although laying on your side in the ice doesn't seem like it would be arousing. Then out of nowhere his "cock eye" is placed in her mouth. He tells her to open wide so he can "ejaculate" in it. Never heard a man use thar word in the moment, but not surprised you used it. Nice to know you are as clueless about male anatomy as you are about female. A BJ isn't just opening your mouth and waiting- you have to actually stimulate the man. The story ended in your typical clueless fashion, asserting that a load of jizz was enough to make her full enough to not order lunch. I was hoping that by 2019 you would've learned and improved but I was wrong. Still can't believe how awful your writing continued to be, even with all the years that passed since your first story. I'm amazed time made things even worse in terms of your understanding sex and anatomy.

The beginning was fine but then the story got a little fast and it was kind of stupid