All Comments on 'Bimbo Outbreak Pt. 15'

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TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthorover 1 year ago

Excellent story. Hoping he takes his sisters before the Beast does

KellvallonKellvallonover 1 year ago

I'm anxiously waiting to see what happens between Tom and his sisters.

202GE202GE4 months ago

The wordy but interesting story turned gratuitous with the main character all but being elevated to a god. Also, the story is repetitive in its descriptions. It retells an idea in a different way two sentences later.

MenoetesMenoetes4 months agoAuthor

Yeah, this was the first story I wrote, so there are plenty of flaws. I still think the premise was fun though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great story. Eager to see how things progress.

AnonymousAnonymous9 days ago

Wonderful episode! I await news of the sisters the cop, and the Beast.

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