All Comments on 'A Working Holiday'

Very pleasant story.

Max is 18, on the cricket team that our mc is the captain of. In the second chapter the mc says his oldest is 14. How does that work? Overall, this story just doesn't work for me.

Neither the infidelity nor the pregnancy were necessary, and they detract.

Dodged a bullet!

4

Asshole. Cheating asshole. Despicable from anyone.

despicable asswipey cheating asshole. Didn't bother reading the rest of the story, not worth my time. 1 star. I can't believe this is from the same author who wrote amazing BTBs

A well written story featuring three people who are frankly low life's. All knew he was married. All played the game. Sorry whilst this was written well I couldn't identify emotionally with the characters. It's probably quite true to life for some people but I didn't like what happened. BardnotBard

He stole her life.

A cheating, lying, thieving asshole. Well written piece about an absolute scumbag

Interesting piece, but even more interesting are the comments. I assume that the absolute ones are American, but the characters are British, and even though marital fidelity is obviously an issue there too, there is a gulf in moral attitudes between Europe and the US that I suspect many there are not really aware of.

For me, the main moral question is not the one of sexual relations between the adults, they need to sort those out for themselves, but rather: how will life go for the coming baby?

I would of given it a five but cheating is cheating it doesn't matter on which side it is

Darren