by PhilCanyon
Brilliant story. I was eagerly awaiting each break as much as the men, although I was a little disappointed with the ending. I would have liked them all to have seen her pussy properly in one of her poses rather than just a glimpse as she twirled. But.....can I join your next poker game?
Story ,Illustrations the whole thing,sets a new standard for others,very well done indeed.
It was an awesome story with even better pics..excellent quality pics and story.. do go on writing.. im sure even a trip to the supermarket will be sexy with u n ur camera around.. honestly am awaitin ur next illustrated story..
glad to have found a story where the wife is naughty but still not a slut to have had a gangbang from this situation.. lends a whole new dimension.. excellent work sam and ana..
This woman is so hot and so beautiful. We must see more of her. good story too!
You have crafted such a well written and presented erotic story. The photos add so much to the tale, and they are wonderfully set up and delivered. You are the master of a great erotic genre.
The story was hot and Ana was too! I hope to see Chapter Two real soon! Love her personality. Is she an acquantaince of yours Mr. Canyon?
We would like to thank everyone for their comments and compliments about our pictures, and we'd like to send a special thank you to Phil for including Ana and our pictures in his erotic storytelling!! We love the feedback almost as much as we love doing the pictures!
It's nice having Sam and Ana comment on their story. When they sent me their photos I was immediately excited and began writing the story that very day. The words flew off the keyboard and onto the page! Thanks for the positive comments on the story!
Phil Canyon
I'd sure like to have Ana on my poker table
Really liked your original story and the striptease. I was hoping that the 'boys' were going to bend her over the table, remove those teasing red panties and let everybody contribute to the 'pot'.. Nice pictures
a good horny and belivable story, the type of thing that men dream up, being served up with little treats inbeteen hands (pardon the pun )
Good pictures too, not like soem on here look like they have ben drawn by 6 year olds.
Great writing with great pictures of a very attractive Ana. Although I enjoyed it, I usually come to these stories for more, more sex. Perhaps your next chapter will have Ana do more when someone wins the pot. Years ago, there was a story in Penthouse about a woman who was part of a poker game and five men banged her on the table at the end - that story really turned my wife on - so it's not just a guy thing. You are a superb writer and would do it justice.
I told my neighbor I'd love to see her in a low cut dress. She said, "If you'll buy it, I'll model it for you."
Nice to let your wife arouse your friends. If the guys nailed their own wives you can bet they'd be fantasizing their cocks in Ana....